tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post3013275151556520827..comments2023-12-08T13:21:54.131-08:00Comments on Dangerous With a Pen: Lindsey Learns... About MoodAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16418440256681984621noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-56085572936503800402011-01-17T09:01:22.173-08:002011-01-17T09:01:22.173-08:00Ooh.. haven't thought about mood in this way. ...Ooh.. haven't thought about mood in this way. It's something I'm still trying to figure out in my WIP. My biggest problem is consistency, which I think I'm improving on since I nailed down my characters' motivations. Good post.Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-80129194880284012692011-01-16T20:15:07.537-08:002011-01-16T20:15:07.537-08:00This is a great post! Mood is definitely important...This is a great post! Mood is definitely important. Glad I found your blog!Nataschahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15971236835645904189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-33518788856985162332011-01-16T08:18:32.895-08:002011-01-16T08:18:32.895-08:00I am amidst a revision right now, and I haven'...I am amidst a revision right now, and I haven't reread it for mood...but now I'm gonna!<br /><br />Thanks!<br /><br />Shelleystoryqueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039684494823420722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-53291715674724201582011-01-15T18:18:25.490-08:002011-01-15T18:18:25.490-08:00I just started reading another book where the mood...I just started reading another book where the mood is sort of "uh oh" at all times but the MC is very optimistic. The book is Waiting for Normal by Leslie Connor. A quick read but a good one!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418440256681984621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-83863162266577396622011-01-14T04:42:10.317-08:002011-01-14T04:42:10.317-08:00Hmmm. Now you've got me thinking. The moods in...Hmmm. Now you've got me thinking. The moods in my novels do change, depending on what's going on. But they aren't 'Oh my God, where did that come from?'mood changes.Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-39180442434173812102011-01-13T21:59:32.175-08:002011-01-13T21:59:32.175-08:00I've read many places that your reader should ...I've read many places that your reader should have an idea about the book they're about to read after the first page... and I'd say that's pretty good advice :) It's unsettling and almost irritating when a book seems to start out in one direction and rapidly switches gears. It CAN be done masterfully, but I've rarely seen it happen.<br /><br />I like talking mood :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034419617457525778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-6157123798936650982011-01-13T20:33:55.224-08:002011-01-13T20:33:55.224-08:00Mood is important. I guess mine is desperate, tho...Mood is important. I guess mine is desperate, though I try to lighten it once in a while so the reader feels hope and empowerment.<br /><br />You're right though, mood is hard to sustain.<br /><br />.......dhole<br /><br />OH BTW: I got the prize today in the mail. What a lovely treat that was. Thank you :)dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-26615581940346905202011-01-13T19:05:20.143-08:002011-01-13T19:05:20.143-08:00FOTHAT was incredible! So fast paced and eerie, an...FOTHAT was incredible! So fast paced and eerie, and yes, helpless! It's not often a book pulls me in quite like that one, and about zombies at that!<br /><br />My own book feels a bit helpless at times, and dark, but oddly enough, I'd like to think the overall mood is hopeful. Hm, I don't know. Maybe I'd have to ask one of my readers.<br /><br />Good luck with your WIP! Good on you for getting back to it!Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-60295021438353861422011-01-13T17:41:08.696-08:002011-01-13T17:41:08.696-08:00Hannah - Are you writing horror? I would love to ...Hannah - Are you writing horror? I would love to read a horror YA!<br /><br />Kitty - Sounds like dystopia, my favorite! :D Is that the genre you are writing?<br /><br />Googlover/keishua - I often choose that way, too, which is probably why certain covers lure me in and others don't - they have to reflect the mood I'm feeling like reading. :) Probably why the last 3 books I read have been pretty bleak overall (What the Dickens, The Forest of Hands and Teeth, The Replacement). Still reading the third, but I think I am ready for something with a little different mood next...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418440256681984621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-75499665190711134622011-01-13T08:46:00.809-08:002011-01-13T08:46:00.809-08:00A great discussion. I typically chose the books I ...A great discussion. I typically chose the books I read by moods. I also hope to convey a certain mood and tone in my writing.keishuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15425697524293318047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-88818319567238780602011-01-13T08:04:00.729-08:002011-01-13T08:04:00.729-08:00Ooh I've never thought of mood in my writing i...Ooh I've never thought of mood in my writing in such a way!! Oooh got me thinking now. Mood!! I guess in my current wip, my mood is that of futile inevitability! I hope anyway!! :-)<br /><br />Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-64126362947135801122011-01-12T18:56:33.774-08:002011-01-12T18:56:33.774-08:00hmmm, I'm not sure what my mood would be, I ha...hmmm, I'm not sure what my mood would be, I haven't thought about it though. I'm not done with the first draft though and I like to ponder those things when it's whole. to be continued...Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-68837974774764285392011-01-12T18:14:17.201-08:002011-01-12T18:14:17.201-08:00Roxy - I hope you end up getting all wrapped up in...Roxy - I hope you end up getting all wrapped up in your story and loving it eventually. :) You're such a talented writer, I understand your struggle between writing what you want and writing what might be most salable. Best of luck with both!<br /><br />Kristin - I will definitely read the sequel. It wasn't my favorite book but it kept drawing me back in. My 8 yr old is creeped out by the cover, lol. Sounds like you have a definite sense of where you are going with your WiP. I feel like I do, too... let's hope it comes out that way as I write it! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418440256681984621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-38563319973157284072011-01-12T17:55:22.146-08:002011-01-12T17:55:22.146-08:00ohhhhh the forest... that Carrie Ryan.. she sure c...ohhhhh the forest... that Carrie Ryan.. she sure can make a reader want to throw the book across the room, huh?? ;) Just wait until you read the sequel.. let's just say, I'm on pins and needles for the third coming later this year!!<br /><br />The mood of my current WIP is confusion, at least that's what I'm going for. Then it will morph into sadness somewhere along the line, then into resentment, then there will be a fight for happiness!! :) hahahaha. Thanks for reminding me that I must be mindful of that!!Kristin Raehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14169967050454852124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-71232891529107426052011-01-12T17:41:30.450-08:002011-01-12T17:41:30.450-08:00Hey, Lindsey! I love the pictures. Very mood-evoki...Hey, Lindsey! I love the pictures. Very mood-evoking. I am currently rewriting a sad, dark yet redemptive story. I don't love it, but I think it will sell before the novel I wrote first that I really like. Ah, well. Thanks for dropping round my classics corner. :)Roxyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787088898112141579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-52078533667986782352011-01-12T17:27:04.035-08:002011-01-12T17:27:04.035-08:00storytreasury (love that name!) - that's sort ...storytreasury (love that name!) - that's sort of what I'm trying to work out, too. I wrote in past tense initially, but my character and the mood in general I think needs to have an innocence at the beginning of my story that can't really be achieved if she is telling the story after the fact. That's the exact reason I've been toying with switching to first person present tense, to try to synch up voice and mood better.<br /><br />Jemi - Mood swings! Hehe :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418440256681984621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-51489574104724916622011-01-12T17:23:04.017-08:002011-01-12T17:23:04.017-08:00Carol - Thanks! I like your ideas on adding backg...Carol - Thanks! I like your ideas on adding background nuances to shift mood. The way I have it outlined, I'm hoping the mood shifts naturally as the story progresses. Fingers crossed...<br /><br />Vic - What a smart idea! I love the idea of finding pieces of art that will get me into the right frame of mind. The difficulty I have using music is that I need quiet when I write, and I sometimes only have 10-20 minutes at a stretch to scribble down a few sentences, so I don't want to try to fit in listening to music and then getting quiet and writing. Plus, for me, music conjures up very specific stories, and if they are not the story I am working on, I am thrown completely off! :) But art I could have handy and just keep in my writing area for instant mood settage... I definitely think I'll look for some pictures that would work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418440256681984621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-78597629705438689982011-01-12T16:42:11.273-08:002011-01-12T16:42:11.273-08:00I think the moods in most of my stories swing betw...I think the moods in most of my stories swing between suspenseful and happy. I have to add more angst!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-31336896055965707112011-01-12T14:27:06.065-08:002011-01-12T14:27:06.065-08:00That's a tricky balance, hitting exactly the r...That's a tricky balance, hitting exactly the right note like that.<br /><br />It's a good question; I am not sure what the underlying mood of the novel in progress is. The MC is not a happy person, that's for sure, a little depressed and bitter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-62814339346900898652011-01-12T13:26:41.299-08:002011-01-12T13:26:41.299-08:00you say writing to music doesn't help... but h...you say writing to music doesn't help... but how about art? maybe if you could find a few inspirational pictures that fit the particular mood you are going for, you could view them quickly at the beginning of you writing jam session to help push you into the mood you need. i use music but art could work just as well... or words! you could pick a few quotes that set your mind into the fitting mood. <br />as for the general mood of the novel- i think of it as an aspect of setting, and setting as a character of its own. a dynamic setting is more interesting than a static one- as a dynamic character is more interesting than a static one... well to me that is. i remember your flash you wrote for the fairytale blogfest mostly because of the vivid imagery and mood you captured... so i think that mood is somethig you excel at... well, if this wip is like that flash!! :) best of luck to you! yay! :)vic caswell https://www.blogger.com/profile/01218698236837610704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2940470221686681297.post-72314080954281552872011-01-12T13:12:32.828-08:002011-01-12T13:12:32.828-08:00Very nice discussion of mood! I've read The Fo...Very nice discussion of mood! I've read The Forest of Hands and Teeth and know exactly what you're talking about there. Tricky, what you're trying to do with your WIP. If I were writing that, I'd throw in tinges and hints of the bleaker stuff all along, to help the transition. That way it will be more believable when you switch. Like it's sunny (figuratively) but there are those darker clouds by the horizon...<br /><br />Good luck!Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.com